Inner Whispers

Rookie - 47 Points (May 25,2008 (d day this page was born) / Philippines)

! ! ! Silence Surrender - Poem by Inner Whispers

The kiss that made me blush last night
Through the silence of the coldest fright,
Left a chilling and enchanting delight
Yet suddenly disappeared at my sight.

Doves flew upon the drag of your footsteps
Away from me after that soothing lips,
Silence occurred, I haven't uttered a sound
Silence of surrender I have found.


Comments about ! ! ! Silence Surrender by Inner Whispers

  • Rookie - 0 Points Daniel Sweeney (8/8/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    I like the description of the inherent insecurity portrayed in this poem (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/9/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    silence of surrender I have found. good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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