Silent Fire Poem by Baharak Barzin

Silent Fire

Rating: 3.8


Silent fire wishes a match
to show the flames
The match wishes a rub
to show the power
But the power wishes never be born
Can we end this cycle?
The power called 'It'
The 'It' what we are wishing for a lifetime

Friday, February 17, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: power
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2018

philososphical.. i had to read it twice to understand what you are trying to convey...... beautiful dear poetesss. you are a great poetess. pl. write write write and do not stop writing. tony

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Unwritten Soul 17 February 2012

A dilemma of fire and flames...keep burning if it give you warm and let it flame if it bright your dark but flame always with fire..if power wished never be used then use strength may it give you new hope...silent fire wont warm nor give you a light so let it speaks out and give you all what you want...at least let it give a power when it comes to someone else for you to prove..that there's a fire just was silent once_Unwritten Soul

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