Arthur Q. Kromwelle


Silent Moon - Poem by Arthur Q. Kromwelle

silent moon it sits and waits
oh the depth of which I cannot fathom
desperate toll and chasing wind
the sun left stranded in the night
silent moon, oh smile on me
silent moon, tonight
tonight


Comments about Silent Moon by Arthur Q. Kromwelle

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/10/2009 12:37:00 PM)

    That is a pretty good rhyme in this verse. Beyond that, I have a hard time
    determining what this is about. It is obviously a prayer to the moon, but
    for what reason or to what purpose. I suppose I'm supposed to guess. No can do. I like it layed out a little more. Oh well, still a good rhyme.

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  • Rookie Florence P. Wordsmith (1/30/2009 6:45:00 PM)

    I like the imagery of a trapped sun. Have you thought of publishing this? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Leslie Ching (1/29/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    nicely and thoughtfully written...i like your use of repetition... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 487 Points Patti Masterman (1/29/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    This is some nice writing. I like it a lot. It is unashamedly
    poetic. Just beauty. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009



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