Simple Call Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Simple Call

Rating: 5.0


Nice souls do exist but speak little
I expect more and fail to settle
i wait for it but expect more
Tell me now where to go and score?

I know it is not easy win
Yet I am very much keen
I want lovely heart to read
The message before going dead

It may have sensation
Good wishes for relation
New angle for love thoughts
Victory flags without being fought

Yes such nice dream sequels
And more for world to tell
Try at least once to feel about love
It is nice thing to feel and leave

Love permanently if that appeals
Live within area if that looks real
It has no boundary wall
But respond to simple call

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Interesting, but I find it a little unclear. Aaron Carlin36 minutes ago I did enjoy that poem, but what it is a about I am not entirely sure. However, I like the way it sounds though, and I have at least something of an idea on what it's about. nice souls exist, but speak little. Agreed! Comment +1 seems good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Chelsie Crossfield38 minutes ago I don't have much time, and therefore can't go into dept but it's ok. Comment +1 OK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Della Meeks38 minutes ago Good. Needs a little work. I am a grammar nut and have a hard time reading things that can't or don't make grammatical sense to me.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Madder Hatter likes this. Madder Hatter Beautiful 5 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Nice souls do exist but speak little I expect more and fail to settle

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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