hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,768 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Simple Expression - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

You are certainly best poetess
That reflects on face
It is known fact
When you prefer to act

Poetry comes from within
It is certainly clear win
Not all souls can think
They are defeated and sunk

You will contain
The plight and pain
The human misery
And blessings from almighty

What else you need?
When you have no greed
No expectation and no return
It is simple call and slight turn

That poem shall be forgotten
But not the spirit expressed often
There is clear message
That is applicable in all the ages

The hate is turned in to love
That was message you drove
That may be revived even years after
People may think wisely as on looker

I speak on no one’s behalf
But I consider as my half
As wife is to husband
They are none to second


Comments about Simple Expression by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    Sarah Russell likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    Good!

    Yashika Carter13 minutes ago
    I agree and i like it.....poetry always come from within whether good or bad.
    Comment +1
    clear (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Good!

    Yashika Carter13 minutes ago
    I agree and i like it.....poetry always come from within whether good or bad.
    Comment +1
    clear

    c R14 minutes ago
    good message
    Comment +1
    hard to follow (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Jean Killen14 minutes ago
    No rhythm does not make any sense (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 65,768 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 8:40:00 PM)

    You are certainly best poetess
    That reflects on face (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 15, 2013


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