Simple Poet Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Simple Poet

Rating: 2.8


"Sir, you are not seen on net"
No poem, nothing and no news of late
"I am busy with more constructive side"
So poetry part has been put aside

Poets must relax
Think less and never tax
The tiny brain with lots of strain
It may function less with more of pain

"I shall come back with force again"
He asserted with promise to remain
Again to be active on forefront
To take more of burden and bear the brunt

There can be no fair opinion
About what we write and contain!
Put to readers and hear no complaints
I wanted his views on poems sent

"Poem a day is must" for poet
I prolonged talk and went quiet
Ahead with my point of submission
It was more of part's admission

Readers are our asset
They must easily understand and get
What we try to project and what is aim?
Then we can think how to claim

I find old and young of same breed
They read and comment with same greed
Adore and scold with in no uncertain term
It is now for us to bear in opposite turn

So it is welcome with less or more praise
There is hardly any relevance with chase
It is hidden blow with gentle slap
The golden cage is ready for trap

I write with nothing in mind
Yet lots of thoughts invade and find
Take birth in vacuum and air the view
Readers may like it or not but accepted by few

This is different world with all sorts of imaginations
Position is carved out built the permanent relation
It is that of reader and writer with some kind of bond
I feel it is rare and can be none to second

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2012

Sir, you are not seen on net No poem, nothing and no news of late

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2012

I like it Boonah SCatLess than a minute ago OK I always say what I think and I think I like this one especially Take birth in vacuum and air the view Readers may like it or not but accepted by few enjoyable.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 December 2012

Seen by 10 Rukiah Annuar likes this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2012

seema chowdhury Nice and an expressive write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2012

I like it Boonah SCatLess than a minute ago OK I always say what I think and I think I like this one especially Take birth in vacuum and air the view Readers may like it or not but accepted by few enjoyable.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2012

T A Ramesh It is indeed nice bond between poet and reader ever nothing can match anywhere forever!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 December 2012

Always Nestor ArmasLess than a minute ago Always make tim

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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