'Since You Gone' Poem by seema gupta

'Since You Gone'

Rating: 5.0


'Since you gone'

Storms in the eyes,
Desert heart land.
Feelings of suffocation
Combustion potential.
Moment of blazing coals,
As horrible pain,
Death altercation
Flux of stone body.

Since you.............gone...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 28 October 2017

Death altercation this line is very beautiful

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 30 January 2010

very precise and dry, intellectual, images... reminding me of Ezra Pound's poems.. Compact graphics of imagination coupled with passion..Lovely expressions of sadness and longing

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Rakesh Kumar 16 December 2009

So, sweet. marvelous...

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Sure abhinn 16 December 2009

words are inked with tears with colors of pain, sadness ane despair

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Kente Lucy 05 December 2009

simple, staright forward and lovely

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