Having a dark life with an empty room,
Hopeless chases you were ever you are.
And kills you with a pain, full of worrisome and sadness
thinking too much to your self inside the darkness.
And every one can read your disappointed from your face
Until you found a light far way from the darkness
Which encourages your heart
And noticed from your face.
Your heart beats fast
When you take one step close to the light
Then and all you say is
Hey you cant hold me down any more
I got the top of mountain
I got hammer to beak the wall
I let my self to believe my dreams
Rather then your fears.
I will not put my heard down any more
You can't stop me!
If shout or punish me.
Your shouting I got from a lot of angry
Which made my heart stronger.
As well from your punishment I got creativity
which made me diligent.
Your words of careless
Made me laugh
you can't get me any more
Your plan for breaking me up
Showed me my weakness
Which makes me to work on it.
When I see your heartrending
It shows me that I can beat you.
When you get angry,
that shows me that I won
The poem shows undefeated spirit that can turn an adversity to a positive resolution.Well done.Enjoyed reading.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - 10
It shows me that I can beat you. When you get angry, that shows me that I won Weakness, realization of weakness, then rising from the ashes to become great. you have positive determination. that is the sign of greatness., tony
SPIRAL of energy: Your plan for breaking me up Showed me my weakness Which makes me to work on it. When I see your heartrending It shows me that I can beat you. When you get angry, that shows me that I won
From your punishment I got creativity. A lovely poem showing goodness does defeat evil in our everyday lives. Well done Sahra. Worth my vote.
Verily, a lovely description of the negative and positive forces that dominate the humans. Loved reading it.........10
There is always a demon in us hiding and influencing us to do bad things. thank you for this poem. dev
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
seeing one's own weaknesses, good writing.