Srijeeta Manna

Rookie - 0 Points (Kolkata)

Sleep And Death - Poem by Srijeeta Manna

The wall between my mind and soul
takes away my might as a whole.
I lay here
lifeless, motionless and still,
resembling death.
Yet, I breathe deep inside
sunk in the ocean of sleep.
Losing in the depth of dreams,
me immersed in me.
Fathoms of darkness and light I travel...
I travel to reach there,
to unravel the mystery
of the simple distance between sleep and death
which is getting lesser slowly.


Comments about Sleep And Death by Srijeeta Manna

  • Rookie - 11 Points Sahil Sood (11/17/2012 8:43:00 AM)

    really a nice poem. Just luvd the way you xpressd your thoughts with beautiful words (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie David Gerardino (11/6/2012 2:10:00 PM)

    like the poem/story, , for me the poem needs a little work...still worth reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Jahan Zeb (11/6/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    I loved the way you arranged the words in you poem. I felt pleasure in reading them.
    Losing in the depth of dreams,
    me immersed in me.

    What a thought. Sleep is half death
    Nice work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 6, 2012



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