Sleep Forever Poem by Hannah Diane Williams

Sleep Forever

Rating: 5.0


I'm not tired,
But I want
Nothing more than
To sleep forever

Saturday, April 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm just going through a hard time. I'm physically okay though, so please don't worry about me :)there's just a lot going on right now!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2018

look at the sun. and the moon, and the chirping birds. see a flower. flower knows it will die soon. but still it is happy to dance in the wind...... so is our life...... meditate. God is there for u. you are never alone and we poets are there always for u.. tony

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Hannah Williams 29 April 2018

Thank you. I know. But I struggle with depression and unfortuntely, depression doesn't care that people care. As matter of fact, it tells me the direct opposite.,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Depression gives thought of suicide. This poem is sensitive and thought provoking. Amazing sharing is done definitely...10

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Hannah Williams 28 April 2018

Thank you so much for the feedback! !

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Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

When we say we want to sleep forever, we forget about what happens in death. Your poem responds to what is happening. Far better to write about the positivity of being alive. Also, the beauty of nature.

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Hannah Williams 28 April 2018

I write what I feel...

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