Why smile is necessary?
What message does it carry?
Good will or kind gesture
Or secret hint for sure?
It is generally accepted
And nicely adopted too
Person looses nothing
Gets return of worth something
Life has many angles
It may form triangle
Love axis or for that matter
Something else on platter
Smile has brought changes
From hatred to end of hostilities
Reign of good will
Where people were keen to kill
It has power
And message of rainy shower
You get wet and develop an urge
From ill will to good will with little purge
So people say” love with smile”
Adopt it as habit and form style
People may call you smiling queen
Or as handsome man never seen
It may infuriate person
If you broadly laugh without any reason
But gentle words and kind smile
May change entire scene
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Good idea, but trying to rhyme overtakes Lindsay Nejedlo24 minutes ago You've done a good job with the use of rhyme, though you do not want to take away from the meaning of a poem in order to force a rhyme. I feel as though there is a bit of filler in order to make the rhyme work. I like the idea. A smile is important! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Re: Smile can change (Score: 1) by Rabbitt on Sunday, July 14,2013 (13: 18: 54) Nice poem about a smile.