Smoke Signals Poem by Will B a Poet

Smoke Signals

Rating: 5.0


In the summer sun, the barbies are soon simmering and their smoke signals are shimmering in the building heat.
They are sending messages to all who are ready to read the mood.
SOFT WISPS TRACING THEIR WAY THROUGH THE TREES CARESSING THE SKY AND OUT OF SIGHT.
Were lovers, lost in the moment, allow us to enjoy our special time together.
A DANCING EFFERVESCENT SMOKE STACK SCRIBBLING THE BLUE.
We're party animals, bring something and enjoy the fun.
HORIZONTAL VAPOURS, DISSIPATING INTO THE GREASY BANK.
our fires gone out were shattered, and drifting off to sleep, sorry.
CUMULONIMBUS PULSES FILL THE AIR, SURGING HIGHER WITH EVERY PUFF.
We're sporty, it's any a side, come join the battle.
RIPPLING INCENSE, SEASONED WITH APPETISING SCENTS.
We're doing pot luck, bring us an appetising morsel to share.
WE'RE WAITING ON YOUR SIGNAL.
WE'VE LEFT OUR BRANDING ON THE GRASS,
TO PROVE WE WE'RE HERE.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Observations made about my visit to the meadows a park in Edinburgh.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 July 2021

A descriptive and insightful verse, deeply detailed with good choice of words. A beautiful creation.

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