Snail's Poesis - Conceit One Poem by Warren Falcon

Snail's Poesis - Conceit One



for Leonard

'to variants and …
emendations, …
Let me hear good night.' - Lorine Niedecker

'Our little secrets slink away' - Emily Dickinson


Pace,

if pace one

can, your

paces, your

spaces,

hasten slowly

as the snail

traces her

path if path

she is (she

leaves a

palimpsest) ,

or has

time

enough,

and slime

enough,

tons of it,

to sense

or not

where she

is going

going-not,

(no apparent

plot to)

got to get to

with

or without

a shell

or,

fancier, a

c a r a p a c e

or,

better,

above-whirled

parasol apace


Visualize -

she is

a question

mark,

or wears one

if she

wears

where

she is

without

doubt

or question,


and does

not question

her

trail though

questions

gradually

do naturally


arrive -


how

does she,

snail,

breathe?


if shelled, is

she sleeved

or -un to be

less encum-

bered when

being is

weight enough?


She appears to

wait.

But doesn't.

Does not think

'hesitation'

though she

(appears to)

be

comprised

greatly

of

pauses.

Saturday, September 25, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: imagism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Both these my conceits are for my brother Leonard who loves snails as he says hungrily, 'with butter and garlic, french bread on the side'.
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Warren Falcon

Warren Falcon

Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA
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