Obscene mortals on scene
Adept at betrayal
Off scene goodness off seen
Mortals rest sceptical
Mother queen Earth has been
Her best to be whimsical
Rebirth umpteen on wheeling
Nature 's assaying reviving trial
Unseen Lord off scene
Not yet at self-portrayal
let's wait for the day...but i think this creator is an artist of different sorts!
Its perfectly fine Ma'am. Thank you for that elaboration. Lovely write.
evil people are adept at betrayal Good people seen off and off scene Rest of the mortals remain sceptical Mother Earth is at her best balancing Wheeling rebirths are nature's reviving trial The creator is yet to be at self portrayal ...this is on the mystery of life...is that o.k Kranti andRanjit
Interesting write. Open line gave it a nice start. Nice diction. But I didn't got your third line. On whole good one.
I couldn't get your intent as you intended. Can you please explain it to me ma'am?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Symbolic write...dual meaning any where inside? very intelligently composed...and on the last two lines- i must quote Bhagavat Gita- 'Yadha Yadha Hi Dharmasya' and the rest of that Sloka...10