So I Keep Coming Poem by Manonton Dalan

So I Keep Coming

Rating: 5.0


by lakes lips
kissing few astray
balls from cruel clubs
broken tees littered
scars on green, not fix
falling leaves, squirrel
run up and down a tree
I love fish gliding
like silent submarine

barbeque scent nearby
drive my senses desiring
pork ribs and corn cobs
stop by clubhouse on turn
pick hot dog and hot chili
warm a bit and we're away
chasing rainbow by fairway
next shot would be my best one

Sunday, November 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sports
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 15 November 2015

A medley mix up of romance and tastes and original imagery. Lovely write with rhythmic beat.

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Ari Alsio 15 November 2015

Falling leaves, but have you ever seen the squirrel slips?

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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