So Lovely Life Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

So Lovely Life

Rating: 5.0


Now the mind remains saturate
With no new ideas to relate
The happenings in life with proper prospective
And chose to be selective

The material happiness has taken over
And left behind with no cover
We are causing enough of harm
Inviting many diseases to warm up

We developed satellites
Then came anti satellites
With only spy eyes
For blinding any other try

What is motive behind?
For happy life to find
Or amass wealth which is of no use
To help the mankind or for crisis to defuse

Life is taken as mean to spend as merry making
To everywhere making effort and poking
We stand as poor human being for joking
What else can be there for our cooking?

So Lovely Life
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2015

Definitely mind remains in saturate state with new ideas. Material happiness has kept human being behind cover of truth. Life is taken as mean to spend as merry making and this leads to crisis of personality. Lovely life is this which feel the essence of morality and real meaning of happiness as well as prospective of life. Interesting and amazing poem shared. 5 hours ago by Kumarmani Mahakul to So lovely life

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Douglas Scotney 10 August 2015

Such a funny last line, makes it sound like everything before was inspired by a bad meal.

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Mj Lemon 10 August 2015

This is such a wonderful meditation on the meaning of true happiness...and I am convinced- the best cooking contains joking. A great poem. A 10.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2015

We stand as poor human being for joking What else can be there for our cooking?

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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