Solitude Poem by Julia Klimenova

Solitude

Rating: 4.8


Me and my solitude,
A strange relationship.
By turns embracing it
Or wriggling in its grip.
Is it a cloister, safe,
Where I can take the veil
Restored to peace - or trapped?
A refuge or a jail?
Its silence deafens me -
Or opens up my ear
To something lost elsewhere,
Quiet, simple, clear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 23 February 2006

An elegant piece of writing, Jewel. I prefer the first version, but you are right, in my view, to keep to the one that YOU like best. Warmest regards, Gina.

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Esther Leclerc 23 February 2006

This speaks to me, something I've been thinking about much lately. Are you in my head? ! Thank you for this.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 February 2006

This is perfect now. It is not easy to respond to non-specific criticism on one's own work but you have done a splendid job. Impressed. Best H

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Nick Percowycz 26 February 2006

Julia- I am of Ukrainian decent, born in the United States. You said you have not mastered the english language yet! I could not articulate this any better. You have said things in this poem that has shown me - you are wrong! You are a Master! ! rating this poem a 10! ! ! God bless!

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Sandra Fowler 20 July 2007

Poetry is so often the music of the solitary soul. Would we have it any other way? Warmest regards, SDandra

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Suchoon Mo 20 June 2006

Writing, or saying, anything about solitude, silence, etc. is a very hard task because doing so contradicts solitude and silence. A silent bell is not silent. I refer you to my attempt at this task in the March issue of Underground Window.

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Aashish Ameya 27 March 2006

good one, julia..i also wrote on same..please read it..

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Graham Jones 04 March 2006

In a word excellent, solitude means different things to people, whether embraced or enforced, but you have captured its essence in your poem well done.

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***** ********* 26 February 2006

Solitude is a form of friendship with ones self, well that is what happens when you sink into it without fear anyway Julia. A lovely poem, like a big fluffy cushion, just the way it should be. 10 from smiling with clear, no tears eyes, Tai

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