hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 23,705 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Some Girl


Not some girl

I feel let down
When you write down
“Some girl”
And then it is my turn

To speak
In real terms and feel weak
That you are so special
Honest and jovial

I treasure in heart
As golden piece of an art
That you were not an ordinary
But as life itself and necessary

What would have been our fate?
If we were together very late
Not a note would have been taken by world
But would have spread as mere word

I was not happy either
But decisions still bothered
I smiled at the outcome
It was all for good and welcome

Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 16, 2013

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