Something I Miss Poem by REETESSH SABRR

Something I Miss

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Something I miss that no one can fill,
even me at my own will
Some wishes are just those mercy dreams,
That are worthy for those sleeping streams
When we flow in the waves of the time,
Nights are dark and the winds wild chimes
Hearing to which only can you do is a smile
As they can’t be aloud for the sleep is so fragile
Broken if it is, how will dreams would be seen
Fondness would be gathered how long it been
Love we all have this soul that lives in our heart
Wishes for this craze could never be apart
Something this way can be wished to her that don’t happens
That never fill in my world of missing heavens
That something doesn’t ceases still,
even me at my own will..
Something I miss…

Reetesh Khare 'Sabr'
03/05/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jyoti Saxena 09 May 2009

true; that inspite of everything we feel a sense of depriviation which we just cannot comprehend -but it is there. after much thinking and reading i concluded that it is the differencebetween what we are intrinsically and what we are conditioned to be by our parents for the society at large that craetes a kind of void in our beings-you hv butifuly touched on the topic -well done

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