egi david perdana

Rookie (17 december 1989 / indonesia)

*******son Of Hidden Sun (Lyric) ******* - Poem by egi david perdana

son of hidden sun
lead them with invocation
isn't with flying lizard
that will make you more sincere

son of hidden sun
enforce them with patience
isn't by force
that will make you more devout

son of hidden sun
gaze that hates you as best friends
not as enemy
that will make you more love

son of hidden sun
reply they angry with love
isn't with resentment
that will make you more patience

Comments about *******son Of Hidden Sun (Lyric) ******* by egi david perdana

  • Rookie Truthful Light Treeclimber (1/3/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    awesome! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful electric and hot like the sun (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/21/2008 3:36:00 AM)

    loved this one.....well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Arwen Lee CW (10/10/2008 9:31:00 AM)

    At the moment I knew
    I was abandoned and alone
    I trapped myself in sorrow
    and turned my heart into stone

    Although sunshine is warm;
    but my heart stays cold,
    For there's always shadow,
    resides in my black black heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/4/2008 1:12:00 PM)

    Wonderful composition.
    Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (10/4/2008 2:26:00 AM)

    Egi-the son of the hidden sun
    in his resplendant glory
    great write and +10 regards anjalie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Talia Anziliero (9/24/2008 10:12:00 PM)

    Wonderful read. Harmonising words, INGENIUS! I could picture it (sorta, my minds a bit today!) And now I'm going to read MORE! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (9/19/2008 9:50:00 AM)

    apt title for the deep thinking you have (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ahmad Shiddiqi (8/30/2008 3:56:00 AM)

    masterpiece! I like the words, repeating of son of hidden sun and reply their angry with love. keep writing! where from you got your inspiration, brother? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 28, 2009

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