His voice,
the sound of summer cloud
His walk,
forgotten music notes
His eyes,
brush stroke of kindness
His body,
an arranged symphony
His touch,
scent of gardenia
Summoned by his spirit
I bear him like the songs of the sky.
Dedicated to my younger brother, who got killed violently in October,1995 may you continue to rest in the songs of the sky!
im sorry.. he is in a better place.. nice poem.
yes, a very well written poem, i can tell he was a good man, again, im sorry for your losse.
it was really a touching poem sadly said, may god bless him and give you more patience..sorry for your pain
A very touching piece dedicated to your late brother, may his soul rest in peace.
...superb poem, every word fluid, every word mattered...the sky reaches down to touch this poem and your grief..and to share like you did is a honor..thank you :) tom
Hi Emu - a very beautiful tribute to a lovely brother. I wrot a poem about my Brother Stephen (died 1955 aged 16) called 'MY BROTHER IN HEAVEN' you might like to read it. We remember everything about those whom God chooses to take to heaven when they are yuong and they will be forever young and beautiful in our eyes. My sorrow is shared with yours - we remember 'His voice' 'His walk' 'His eyes' 'His Body' 'His touch' and we do bear them 'Like the songs of the Sky'. If you have faith that your lovely brother is in Heaven with your God it will bring you much joy and peace and release from heartache. It must be TEN for this very lovely and personal poem. Love in Poetry - JOHN.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a poem that explodes with emotions.very powerful poem.