Sonnet 14 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Sonnet 14

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a bark with encouraging shines
a path of hawk like bumblebees
each pictures makes me glides down
gleaming arbor with its divinely gown

that is the relieving Medina all hearts know!
green rifts of light in early morning grow
the darker pond and the stronger paradise
changes but vigorous delights to Obama' eyes

challenging to a vanquished crime
from hill to shore she's in solemn
how its nuances already die
the tornado over turbulence time
flow, flow like thy Spring hymn
wonderful in their empathy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 29 October 2009

interesting poem, very well written...........

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 October 2009

'hawk like bumble bees'... strong.

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Fay Slimm 29 October 2009

'Green rifts of light in early morning grow' - - one of the visionary phrases which make your latest sonnets unique Ahmad - - thank you for sharing your talent with us - - Fay

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Ruerd Visser 29 October 2009

Wonderfull in you empathy you are, sharing your vision of heartt with us, i salute you!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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