Sonnet- Viii Poem by Sherwin Ilagan

Sonnet- Viii

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How precious is the time please let me know?
Am I demanding you the way I ask?
The time is brief to be precise when dusk—
Adheres on us, then it would serve a tow.
Abundant love shall live ‘gainst undertow
Now we are both in forties still with task:
To our beloved seed shall be like flask,
As longer as we can we have to glow.

The greatest gift is here with us- 'twas him,
He is the bridge of mortal long sojourn,
And you are my abode to be preserve—
Inside my heart; there's nothing to redeem.
These precious time of ours soon will adjourn,
As we have felt a rush deep in our nerves.

Friday, July 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my sonnet collections: 'The Sonnets of Love and Devotion'
(For Jerico)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 July 2017

when dusk- Adheres on us; then it will serve the tow. Abundant love shall live ‘gainst undertow He is the bridge of mortal long sojourn, And thou art mine abode to be preserve.. inside my heart. what shall i say...... this is wonderful.. poetic genius are you dear poetess. i want to read all the sonnets so that i may get into your mind.. tha nk you dear poetess. tony

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