Melissa L Tamayo

Veteran Poet - 1,823 Points (Bronx, NY)

Sorrow - Poem by Melissa L Tamayo

Sorrow; Love lost with sadden words
Lost hope with tears that burst
Twisted happiness, that sometimes hurt
Sorrow; A sentiment that makes one tear
Full of emotional sadness and fear
A sense of loneliness unclear
Sorrow; A curse of burning flames deep within
A pot full of worries that brew underneath your skin
A pinch of remorse lingering in your veins
Sorrow; A confused state of mind
That rattles your brain
Sudden lost of thoughts that drive you insane
A train with carts full of pain
Sorrow; An overwhelming sense of driven shame
While emotional strain weakens
The positive one has gained

Topic(s) of this poem: sad

Comments about Sorrow by Melissa L Tamayo

  • R B Seals (1/29/2016 2:16:00 PM)

    Melissa, your choice of words offer a harsh and griping assessment on the concept of sorrow as personified by the overwhelming encounters the subject of the writing has endured. In many ways I can relate, which makes your words all the more poignant. I sincerely hope you are not the subject you have written about. And if you are, I wish I could reach through this monitor and offer you a big hug to comfort you. Thank you for sharing, Melissa! [rating: 10] (Report) Reply

    Melissa Tamayo Melissa Tamayo (1/31/2016 12:10:00 AM)

    R B Seals, your feedback and thoughtful comment is very appreciated. Thank you for your rating.

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  • (11/13/2015 11:23:00 AM)

    Different aspects of pain and sorrow are beautifully defined in the thought provoking poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.9 points. (Report) Reply

    Melissa Tamayo Melissa Tamayo (1/31/2016 12:11:00 AM)

    Ratnakar Mandlik, your very kind. Thank you :)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

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