Sorry My Love Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

Sorry My Love

Rating: 3.5


Sorry my love
I do not have awareness of rhymes
I do not related to Omraa Qais
I don’t flow Antara neither Kuliab
Nor bandaged wounds of Crazy Layla
I do not be Nizar student
How can I manage a word
Or write a poem of love
Your beauty like the night with full moon
As your softness the silk is unable to woven
Your breath challenge every perfumes
Sun quotes from you the light
Your cheeks are fruit basket
Your lips. Oh my God your lips
Neck carving and the body is template
Your hheart is my prisons for life
Sorry sweetie
I do not have awareness of rhymes

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Omraa Qais, Antara, Kuliab, Crazy Layla and Nizar they are arab poets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

yeah, interesting and unique especially your way to express it nice written

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 February 2014

interesting with totally different metaphor...nice to read....

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 January 2014

But u write with the spirit of Rumi! Very nice poem. Gud to read u again. Dont forget to read me too.

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