Mark Anthony Mendoza

Rookie (01/23/79 / Pasay City)

Soulmate - Poem by Mark Anthony Mendoza

You may be surprise how I know most of the things you do
How could I read your mind, how could I see beyond you.
It's not magic or tricks my girl.. maybe if we look beyond
Maybe it's the what they call 'soulmate'
Too early to notice, too early to conclude
But all the signs are pointing in that direction

How could you explain why we both like same things
Why we do things alike, why we think the same...
If it's coincidence then why too much...
What if we believe it is really the so called 'soulmate'
Could you see what my vision is telling me
Then just close your eyes and look inside your heart
Maybe then you'll see the vision i'm telling you
And once again the color of love will shine

But all of this maybe are too soon.. the road is just starting to be one
The light has just turn into green, the lap still count as one..
But no matter how far the race is, how many laps there is..
Still i'll take the race and believe it is what they call 'Soulmate'


Comments about Soulmate by Mark Anthony Mendoza

  • Rookie Unknown Me (1/17/2006 10:51:00 PM)

    cant believe there are people who still believe in soulmates.. sound in love in the poem.. LOL (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie A Harrie (8/26/2005 3:22:00 AM)

    This has a nice feel to it, keep writing while you feel so captivated, it is beautiful inspiration! Amanda (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,690 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (8/26/2005 2:07:00 AM)

    Mark, I like your 'Soulmate' a lot! I have a 'few' suggestions that will add to your piece! I know ur in love so I'll be easy on you...this time...LOL! Ok, here goes:

    'Maybe it's what..dropp the (the) '
    'Pointing in that direction...'
    And it is called 'forever love'
    ...like the same things
    what if we believe it is (really)
    vision (is) telling me
    But all of this maybe too soon.
    How many laps there is

    The poem is good! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 26, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, August 26, 2005


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