That I should fly
On your tailcoat high
Past the moon, where the shooting stars land
Beyond the crest
Of rainbows, blessed
Afloat, with tight hold of your hand
Where comets come drifting
Our spirits uplifting
From cradle to grave, still exploring
The promise of planets
The hopes of our parents
Cosmic comedy, of you, still adoring...
Beautifully penned! Your lines are nothing short of descriptive elegance... Touche dear poet! I believe one of the best things in life is having someone that you knew... and who knew you... when you both were young... the blessing of siblings!
Full of emotion................very well painted...................liked it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear susan greatness in siplicity only you can do this so nice I invite you to read my poems and say something Thanks!