! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***sparks In Dew ***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
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kindness and care redound to swoon
sky in its vastness frilling blue blue
heart spruces up by thrills of white
as red enshrines deep by glow of hope
rigidity in skin loses frigidity of fear
humanity is lost in crowd of cruels
yet love whispers milling through snow
night when remembers grace of silence
heart mellows to croon from heaven
at altar of freshness rejoicing
like a dawn sating in golden spark s in dew
warmth reels through splashing spumes
light cascades on rungs of colors
as joy serenades chilled wall of sky
soul of heaven transcends earth luminous
speckles of newness sobs in iridescence.....
Beautiful imagery created by your choice of words here, I agree with previous comments, the poem title is wonderful and is a precursor to the contents of it :)
humanity is lost in crowd of cruels yet love whispers milling through snow night when remembers grace of silence A cool and tranquil flavour of poetic mind overwhelmes the readers liking. Imagery runs like a black snake with a hissing sound through the vision. Cool but coolness doesn't push the conscious back. It pulls toward a silent dawn where sparkles the dew at the tip of a little grass. Where glimpses of love peeping through with a refraction of rainbow light. Well written poem where humanity remains bright in the crowd of cruels. Thank you for such an excellent open-gift to the readers. Write more and live long. Regards, 10+ pranab
Indeed sparks in the dew light up this poem in a poetic feast of words well done regards
Indeed sparks in the dew light up this poem in a poetic feast of words well done regards
wow Dr shubendho great choice.and good tink, write god so nice your poem: thumb: : +: thumb:
Your unique yet classical style of writing is absolutely beautiful. The poem just wraps you in warm arms and leaves you floating in a sea of pleasure. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
This piece is full of movement. Your words are simply delicious. The way you presented this piece reminds me of the beauty that is bestowed in all of us. When humanity stops to care then poetry such as yours will wither and die. Thanks for master-crafting each line to show us the beauty in all of us! Humanity Rocks! ! !
rom : Judy Meibach (New York United States; Female; 49) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/12/2010 9: 44: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Re: invitation, The poem Sparks in Dew was really good - I liked your choice of words - your usage of the colors and the descriptions - I was just curious why you started each stanza with a lower case letter.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The Beauty not only lay on this poem but plays as in Own Home! Lovely to read,10.