Spear Thistle Cirsium Vulgare Poem by beverley scott

Spear Thistle Cirsium Vulgare

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Battalion -attention!
Battalion -arm!

With a thousand spears they
protect
defend
pierce from all sides,
This gallant regiment with Crimson helmets and flashing swords are
insurmountable
impenetrable
Victorious over all.

Soon to be enveloped,
softened
caressed

by Time

Battalion - disarm
Battalion - surrender
to remember

touched by time
softened
blackened
crippled

Your soft white hair becomes a pillow
to lay your head upon
to dream of
flashing swords and Crimson helmets

Wednesday, May 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: War
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Kings of Scotland chose a thistle for it's prickliness and gallent colour - -Thistle down was gathered and used with feathers to stop pillows and mattresses.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 14 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Beverley. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Anand Brown 28 May 2014

Oh how I love this poem, the ending is shockingly true and renders me filled with many questions about that futility of war and that of life. Great write :)

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