St Kabeer's Couplets 1: In A Duel Of Two Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

St Kabeer's Couplets 1: In A Duel Of Two

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Watching two grudging grinding stones,
Kabeer's lamp grieves laments and moans:
Two huge hunks do when battle,
In safety none can settle.
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Chalti chakki dekh kar, diyā Kabīrā roye
Dui pāţaņ ke bīch mein, sābīt bachā nā koye

The two grinding stones are taken here as two huge hunks at loggerheads and as a result grains that come in their way get ground to pieces. The two fighters might suffer in their conflict, but others too suffer no less.

Topic: duel, fight

Saturday, January 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fight
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A new series on St Kabeer's doha, or couplets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 January 2020

Kabir's Doha's are words of wisdom.I look forward to reading them. Thank you Sir for sharing them with us with your translations.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

Already five are on PH. More will come. I'd sure look forward to your feedback. You have done some excellent translations, and your frank feedback will be valued. Thanks

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Muhammad Ali 11 January 2020

I love to read Kabeer. A man of wisdom. Poetry and brevity, great. Such as.. Maangan maran smaan hy, mut maango koi bheek Maangan say marna bhala, ye hy sut gur ki seekh .. Your poem, translation and explanation are very nice. I learned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

Yes, the doha you have quoted is very well-known and among the best. It will come up for translation in due course. Thanks for the feedback.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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