Stars On Top Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Stars On Top

Rating: 5.0


One star may detach from galaxy
Its fate is chosen by almighty
From years since last it takes place
Life never stops with its pace

Year after year passes on
Sometimes victory is on hand
Sometimes defeat is faced
But goal is always chased

No one looks back
As so much is at stake
Life can not wait for result
It is appreciated and well built

So many lives disappear
Yet human beings never fear
It is non stop occurrence
Feel good and avail as chance

Many empires might have been glorious
Many might have proved disastrous
It is reported to us from time to time
Yet we pick little from past time

This year has also come to an end
Same galaxy and people may remain as friend
The earth may brace up for next monsoon
The grain store may be filled soon

Poor may wish for good crops
Season may show no flop
The struggle may go non stop
Years may stand as stars on top

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

One star may detach from galaxy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

Good David LJL SmallingLess than a minute ago Great moral compassion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2014

welcome Moushumi Khondaker, like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno Happiest New Year! ! ! 7 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

Maricela Ramírez Feliz año bendiciones! about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

not my kind of thing... jonny gogLess than a minute ago Didn't really like it. didn't stir up any emotions or make me think. I never like to lines that finish with the same word ~ time. To me, it seemed a lazy choice of words for what is an eager mind.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 December 2013

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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