Started With A Kiss Poem by Amy

Started With A Kiss

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Started with a kiss
Ended with a tear
First one I shall miss
Last one I still fear

Tears crawling down my cheek
My world silent and hushed
Everything seems so dull and bleak
Let alone my heart, it’s crushed

For you I have pined
The feeling I can’t redeem
Then I received a sign
But what on earth could it mean?

I asked for forgiveness
Though I knew not what I’d done
Feelings in my heart I need to confess
But now our friendship is gone

I left it too late
It took me so long
But your feelings turned to hate
What went wrong?

Started with a tear
Ended in a kiss
Feeling is still here
And you’re the one I miss

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Viruvelil 14 September 2008

Do not cry on lost love or lost opportunities More love more sunny days more opportunities are coming your way Think of tomorrow bright and hopeful Dont simply cry on yesterday

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June Feir-Cruz 11 September 2008

If I am understanding your poem correctly: things go awry when the demarcation of friendship is crossed. In a perfect world: it's better to be friends first if we're lucky and end up closer than that. Love your work. Keep going, keep writing and most of all keep LIVING. Best, June

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