(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Stay With Me

Stay just one more day with me
Don`t fly away, sail the sea
Stay and soothe my trembling heart
Stay that we may never part

Do not wander far away
Stay with me just one more day
Lay your head upon my arm
Stay with me and keep me warm

Stay until the sun doth set
Stay so close that I won`t fret
You and I will watch the moon
Do not leave me yet, so soon

Stay, my love, please stay awhile
Stay with me that I may smile
Please don`t go and leave me here
Sad without you, stay my dear

Submitted: Tuesday, June 12, 2012


Comments about this poem (Stay With Me by Valerie Dohren )

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  • * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 10:24:00 PM)

    Hope your love stays after this touching write how could he not.. :)

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  • Thomas A Robinson (7/19/2012 11:45:00 AM)

    Heartfelt, pleadful call to stay a soul.

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  • Walterrean Salley (7/16/2012 7:52:00 PM)

    So rich and telling. Full of the purest of emotions, straight from the heart. Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing it.

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  • Sylvia Lukeman (7/5/2012 7:40:00 PM)

    I find myself very comfortable within the words of your poem.This poem is beautiful.
    Thank your for your very kind comments about my poems
    I hope to get back to you poetry very soon..Warm wishes
    Sylvia

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  • James Cecil (7/2/2012 5:35:00 PM)

    Loved it! Simple and true. Are not simple gifts the best?

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  • The Reader (7/2/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    Just? one more day? will that suffice dear poet? it's an earnest request, plz make it timeless-

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  • Meena Mustafa (7/1/2012 10:47:00 PM)

    Such a romantic poem :) made me smile :))))))

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (6/27/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    Lovely to see a love poem from you, Val.

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  • Simon Collins (6/25/2012 5:34:00 AM)

    Really moving, beautiful words

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  • The Poet Darkling (6/22/2012 3:08:00 PM)

    This is absolutely lovely! So heartfelt and packed with emotion! I'm giving you a standing ovation! !

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