Step-In-Stone Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Step-In-Stone

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Loud sound with heavy fall
Seemed to me as nature’s call
There was no collapse of wall
Only lightening with shining ball

Clouds roaming with curious move
Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove
Pleasant scene with changing mood
Rain may bring happiness and fortune good

I saw the angel rushing from sky
Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why?
May be bringing some fortune on land
Wings so wide spread with raised hands

May be stone was delivered by beautiful angel
Beautifully engraved message with little angle
Sudden dropp from window aroused interest
Heavenly help could only be delivered as best

Heart shown with piercing arrow
Small tree branch in mouth of sparrow
Coming in with precious peaceful message
May be heart is hurt but inviting passage

I tried to decode message on stone
It was for me and for me alone
I should be convinced with honesty behind
Pure feelings in message simply seen and find

It may be natural and divine way
Only pure hearts may have the say
Nature may be lenient with simple blessings
Life may be fulfilled and nothing goes missing

I looked towards sky with broad smile
Happiness surfaced and laughed for while
Alas! she was not with me to share the joy
I never considered her doll or simple toy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suwarna Patil 07 October 2009

saw the angel rushing from sky Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why? May be bringing some fortune on land Wings so wide spread with raised hands

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Maulin Shah 07 October 2009

saw the angel rushing from sky Shining stone in hand but couldn’t think why? May be bringing some fortune on land

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 08 October 2009

You’ve rightly said that heavenly messages can be read by “Only pure hearts” and by only those for whom they are intended. “Message on stone” could signify that it is of eternal value. A good reflective poem with an aesthetic touch.

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Marieta Maglas 08 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove Pleasant scene with changing mood Rain may bring happiness and fortune good excellent descriptive poem, thank you for sharing..10++++++++++

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Raju Rajput 09 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call

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Edwina K 11 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Sadia Hussain 11 October 2009

Clouds roaming with curious move Thunderous sound adds fear but not remove

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Sunita Rao 10 October 2009

There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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Venkat Ramanna 10 October 2009

There was no collapse of wall Only lightening with shining ball

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K.v. Subbarao 10 October 2009

Loud sound with heavy fall Seemed to me as nature’s call There was no collapse of wall

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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