I insist …
To batter those
Sharp corners
Of beloved love
Humble and genuine
I know well it might be
Still.. I insist to do so
I insist …
To leave you there
In the field
Alone befuddled
I know well you might be
Still..I insist to do so
I insist ….
To be blind
To see you, to feel you
And isolate you from me
I know well, it might pain
Still..I insist to do
Sandhya
21.07.2009
good write.yes, it is sometimes better to quit then carry on with certain relation ships, maybe for the betterment of both.even if it is hard to do.
Nice refrain. The last stanza really appealed to me. The 'Still' does the trick for me. Zmiles!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a gain a very beautiful lines woven in poem with beautiful ideas.thanx for sharing voted10 surya