Still Living Poem by Asif Baloch

Still Living

Rating: 5.0


My heart is sorrow-cleft
and wounded i do live
fall from mountain
and drown in salty streams

Alas! my fellow friends,
my well wishers
do not ask me
to be happy
thus now
it's been decades,
since I last heard
the sound of smiles

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ata khan 21 February 2009

beautiful poetry Asif, zabardast keep it up yarra...

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Kesav Easwaran 19 February 2009

good piece...words used have real depth and punch they meant to be...10

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rago rago 18 February 2009

Are not you really still living. You are living and certainly find a ray to live. Beautifully penned.

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