Still Playing Catch-Up With Her Poem by Eillio Imbasciati

Still Playing Catch-Up With Her

Rating: 5.0


Other than his life story,
He doesn't know what he did wrong
Life is lonelier without her in it
Her volatility doesn't bother him a bit,
Although he's out of patience, he's out of time
For her still, a slight smile, however wounded the look
It hardly matter that she gets mad, as we'll work on getting even later
Still playing catch-up with her,
Since relationships take work, and need a lot of water,
Well, doesn't that all just make the devil see red?

Saturday, January 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship,relationships,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 11 January 2020

Beautiful and well penned

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Captain Cur 25 February 2021

I feel the frustration in your write. If relationships were easy we would all be in one, and most of them would last. Unfortunately, the opposite appears true. No great words of wisdom here, just empathizing with your situation.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 25 February 2021

For her still, a slight smile, however wounded the look It hardly matter that she gets mad, as we'll work on getting even later Still playing catch-up with her, love and relationship....... a big question also. remember love is always a mystery. A great poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 January 2020

Such a nice poem, Eillio. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Eillio Imbasciati 13 January 2020

I'm more exasperated and disappointed with the person the piece is about. My life isn't so hot right now anyways, so her choice of approach is just another drop in the bucket. She knows by now who I am, and not to be so reckless, but she just does whatever she wants anyway.

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Unwritten Soul 14 January 2020

Ok, then just go and meet up to solve before its too late.

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Unwritten Soul 13 January 2020

So it ok now right? Good then, forgive n move on... How to forgive? Think that the person is just a lesson that appear in human form. You have much more ahead, lot of great things to not be wasted. So look for that and remember, your life and as other life is just too good to be stuck. If you stuck you will delay the good things with bad feeling only. Take care, be fine soon.

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Unwritten Soul 12 January 2020

Maybe if we can see a tired plant has no will to stand up straight, wilted...may we can help the plant to treat the self root first, to bring more volume of green then bring all the flowers bloom around...then you may see some butterflies or even birds come around. Dont feel bad too much, you yourself too have a life that supposedly not to be wasted by sadness, enriched yours then only you can slowly fix what you want. Take care and all the best!

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Eillio Imbasciati 14 January 2020

I mean, it's okay I guess, she can do what she wants (free will and all) , but nothing's resolved. She's been baffling me since 2008, and usually we move forward as if nothing has happened. Thing is, my location is due to change soon, she's my one contact, and I no longer have the time to wait around for something to happen.

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Eillio Imbasciati 13 January 2020

I'm really kind of exasperated and disappointed with that particular person; my life isn't all that hot right now anyway, so what she's all about (or not about) is just another drop of the bucket. She understands these things though, and yet still acts reckless.

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