SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 6,751 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Stillness - Poem by SALINI NAIR

Lost all loved
Foundation of stillness

Lost all dreams
First pillar of stillness

Lost all support
Second pillar of stillness

Lost egoism
Third pillar of stillness

Lost temper
Fourth pillar of stillness

Vagueness
The roof of stillness

Sink in tears
Purified the self

There erect a wonderful self
Behold the courage crafted

There arises a brave human
Silently in some corner! ! ! ! !

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Comments about Stillness by SALINI NAIR

  • Gold Star - 8,357 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/3/2014 6:55:00 AM)

    How to create a brave human being? Answered in the poem nicely. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Salini. Brave human is erected after purifying the inner self...Poem with in depth meaning. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,759 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/2/2014 3:13:00 AM)

    Stillness found within self after discounting all the upright structures of stillness.......great thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,720 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/2/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    The qualities you mentioned in your lovely poem are the qualities of a great leader. we are common men and it will be too much for a common man. But I don't mean you are wrong, you are 100% correct. A nice write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 2, 2014


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