hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,810 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Stone In Pond - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I dropped stone in pond
Soon the ripples were found
It traveled in rounds to shore
The message was found somewhere

It shared my concern
Now it was my turn
To think and go for solution
To express firmly about the right resolution

It bothered me about existence
I had asked about it once
Soon I was fully seized
With the soul that had fully ceased

I again searched the soul
What was it expecting as call?
It wanted the meaning of life in real
I had decided once for all to settle

I was turning philosophical
Neither had it to deal with struggle
Nor had to do with future trouble
It was for mental condition to be sable

It is nice to come in terms with mind
Both soul and mind should work with mutual kind
If both work in harmonious manner
The whole body can feel fine and better


Comments about Stone In Pond by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    rightly stated

    hemu gupta13 minutes ago
    in a beautiful manner
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 8:36:00 AM)

    ok


    Melanie Blaine12 minutes ago
    I wonder if English is a second language for you. There are issues with tenses and sentence structure. Good though, the emotion behind the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 7:57:00 AM)

    I dropped stone in pond
    Soon the ripples were found (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 11, 2014


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