Stopping The Sun Poem by Shawn Greyling

Stopping The Sun



Do not let the sun set upon our skin
Keep Judgement day at bay
Electric signs blind my eyes and
Dollar bills float through my veins.

The urge to kill wins tar upon our tracks
and buttlers our footsteps.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry A. Lanier 28 April 2009

excellent...only...I wanted more.....ahhhhhh

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

Has a Robert Louis Stevenson vibe to it.. truly poetic..amazing work..well done

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