Strain Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Strain

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Pain! !
Strain,
In chain;
Travelling with the train,
As a prisoner of war.

Rain!
But, with no gain;
Because you have no grain,
But in chain! !
With the vain acts of mankind on earth.

Your brain!
Without any help from Cain your friend;
On this issue,
A prisoner of war in chain.

Drain, stain!
With the blood marks on your cloth;
Facing the hardships of life,
As a prisoner of war.

Sunday, January 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: prison
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 January 2016

The life of a soldier is full of pain and strain, especially in the enemy camp as a prisoner! Poignantly presented!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 24 January 2016

Very well done, Like it.

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 January 2016

Edward, would you like to join our new editorial project: '' POETRY AGAINST INEQUALITY ''? If so, let me know. Ok? ********************************** - DEADLINE: February 20,2016 - 1 POEM (in English) of maximum 25 lines; - SUBJECT: 'INEQUALITY' as it is described in the OXFAM Report 2016 (released on Jan.18) **************************** Cheers

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