What do you think this poem is about?

strange sickness.

You are the reason for my illness,
You are the remedy for my sickness,
The strange sickness attacks me,
By increasing my heart's rhythm,
Giddiness in the head,
Palpitation at the chest,
Loss of appetite and
Scores of other symptoms,
Feeling quite hot when you are far,
Feeling strange when you are near,
All people seem to be happy and smile,
When you hold my hands,
Everyone seem to be sad and cry,
When you go away from me,
What sickness is this so strange,
That is induced by you?
What sickness is this so unique,
That is cleared by you?
You are the reason for me to be awkward,
Giggle at my mother when she scolds,
You are the reason for me to be childish,
When my father checks my progress,
You are the reason for me to flunk,
Two three subjects all of a sudden,
I am not ashamed of that failure, my love,
As long as you are the cause,
And the remedy for my sickness..
Something in you causes this!
Something in you clears this!

Submitted: Wednesday, June 13, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I dedicate this poem to Thiruvalluvar for I have written this poem based on his famous phrase 'cause and remedy' and something in you.

Comments about this poem (strange sickness. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi )

Enter the verification code :

  • Sreelekha Premjit (6/17/2012 5:52:00 AM)

    great poem.. thanks for sharing

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rajendran Muthiah (6/13/2012 9:58:00 PM)

    Something in her causes strange sickness to him. He behaves in strange ways. To cure this longing, they must be separated to unknown places. There is no herbal medicine available with her. Even if one kills oneself, this sickness will make the other depressed or mad.

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 2 comments »
[Hata Bildir]