Ashleigh Leona Mellon

Rookie (07/07/90- / Armadale, West Lothian, Scotland)

Stranger In West Lothian


As I walk alone in the Rain
Where I go, is a Lonely path
I feel alone, lost and cold
If you were me right now,
Ask yourself this...

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Kids just won't leave be Be
they bully me day in and Out
They break Me, Belittle me
I Fell from grace, and into tears
Wish they'd leave me be

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

I feel like I am an No-One
I look to a song for solace
I feel at peace Listening
To 'Stranger In Moscow'
By Michael Jackson.

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Like I'm A Stranger
In West Lothian
Cos I am Autistic
It goes on and On And on
It makes me feel down

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Like Stranger in West Lothian
They see me as a danger, a nobody
How does it reaaly feel?
It makes sad and Lonely,
It really does

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

No sunny days for me
Just sad gloomy rain
I cry alone with the wind
It so sad to even bear
Baby, I am so lost inside

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Like Stranger In West Lothian
Yeah, Stranger in West Lothian Baby
How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

I only want love, and friendship
But this is harder to find,
My Autistic Way restrict me
friends of the earth, dogs, are
all I have left. call me.

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Like Stranger In West Lothian
Yeah, Stranger in West Lothian Baby
How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

The rain is serene
I get soaked,
my boyfriend left me
For someone else
here I am Abandoned without love

Like Stranger In West Lothian
Yeah, Stranger in West Lothian Baby
How does it feel?
How do you feel?
Shivering alone in the rain
How does it feel?
Cos I'm Alone
And Cold Inside

Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, April 17, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

there is a true meaning to this poem, Dear fellow Poets of the world, this is a take of a famous song by my favourite late Pop Star, Michael Jackson 'Stranger In Moscow'

but because of the title above, It is entitled 'Stranger In West Lothian' I always feel lonely, without love from a relationship with a dominant male, or having little amounts of friends watching my back, bullying is the main reason on why I don't commune well enough, also because I am autistic ways.

It feels like armageddon because I dont have anyone to watch my back, exept blissful familY Life.

Life for me on the inside and outside of my shell and broken soul, lies deep within my loneliness.

Comments about this poem (Stranger In West Lothian by Ashleigh Leona Mellon )

  • Rookie Ashleigh Mellon (3/31/2012 6:16:00 PM)

    there is a meaning ringing true to this poem......

    I was walking Alone in the rain,
    Where I go, It's A Lonely Path

    these lines mean that I am always lonely, I try to make friends but I keep failing

    I took the chorus from the reference to this poem, How Does it feel?
    How Do you feel?
    when you're alone
    and cold Inside

    I took it from MJ Song (Michael Jackson) Stranger In Moscow and tweaked it, Stranger In West Lothian so, I think this poem to me has a special meaning Mr. Fitzgerald. Even at home And College I am lonely, I find a place on my own, away from my classmates, and sometimes have a heartbreaking moment to myself and cry, The line- They Break Me, Belittle Me Shows that this is about my lonliness due to people in my class bullying me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Griffn Fitzgerald (3/27/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    This made me cry, it is absolutely beautiful and i mean that (Report) Reply

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