“I knew you were for me”
She spoke gently as if totally free
From shock she had suffered
And almost sunk with opinion differed
“I can’t hate whole world”
When my own family members turned cold
I was reminded and repeatedly told
Never agree for soul being sold
It was nightmare
I had only sky to stare
Count stars and assume about treachery
Where was my savior the almighty?
After years I saw her
Same spirit and same face to appear
Rose I would name her to fit as well
She was before me to speak or tell
One thing I must confess
In my prayers too I had same face
All the smiles with red cheeks
I wanted in life time to seek
She is dearest and dearest
Gold, diamond and above all best
I never intended to call her for test
It was all my desire to be put at rest
How do I continue without her presence?
I shall seek answer from her at once
I hope for her to be reasonable
Never to feel at odd to invite stress with struggle
Garrick Hennessy3 minutes ago a few basic errors (or is the lack of articles intentional?) clearly a piece of writing filled with emotion. Not really my personal cuppa but a popular cuppa nonetheless. With some editing, it could go from solid to very good.
“I knew you were for me” She spoke gently as if totally free
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Imagery is there Fred Lassonde2 minutes ago Nice Comment +1 solid poem