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Success Poems - What will be your legacy?
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Do I wander through life aimlessly? Wild, reckless, inconsiderate Unmindful of the consequences of my behaviour Do I run wild in a savage stupor? Pugnacious, belligerent, impolite Unconscious of the altitude of my ignorance Unaware of the latitude of my negligence Carefree Leaving a trail of scarcity Along a path of regret Leaving years of psychological scars In the repressed minds of distressed adults In the misguided souls of troubled youths
Will I leave disillusioned children? Angry and confused Shameful and misguided Lost and astray Crying for direction Weeping for guidance Longing for unconditional love Grieving for sound judgement For I taught them not a lifetime of wisdom For wisdom was not important For I offered them not sound advice For I never took life seriously For I taught them not discipline For I was reckless and immature For I showed them naught but a dropp of love For my selfishness knew no bounds
Will I leave disappointed partners? Bitter and frustrated Troubled and wounded Disturbed and injured Wishing for sincerity Longing for honesty Praying for fidelity Yearning for faithfulness For I killed their trust Due to my shamelessness For I eradicated their hope Due to my disrespect For I damaged their faith Due to my infidelity For I destroyed their confidence Due to my deception For I killed their self development Due to my ignorance
Will I leave appalled individuals? Disgusted and revolted Unconcerned and apathetic Sarcastic and scornful Mocking my ignorance Sickened at my negligence Horrified at my irresponsibility Deriding my financial intelligence Appalled at my selfishness For I disrespected many good folk In the name of humour Mere mockery in fact For I abused much kindness In the name of friendship Sheer exploitation to be precise For I never listened to others In the name of intelligence Simply arrogance no doubt For I spoke ill of people In the name wisdom Purely foolishness indeed For I was impatient with the most enduring In the name of progress Clearly mental commotion For I was unforgiving with the most compassionate In the name of truth Conceitedness in fact
Fatherhood was not my forte For I struggled to maintain my youth Relationship was not my aspiration For I disliked commitment Friendship was not my goal For I detested disagreement Education was not my focus For I found it a bore Investment was not my desire For I cherished the consumer lifestyle Responsibility was not my wish For I cherished excitement and folic Discipline was not my want For I enjoyed ease Devotion was not my focal point For I choose carelessness
So what will you leave? A story of inspiration through your achievements A fable of love through your affection An account of devotion through your loyalty A description of success through your diligence A portrayal of courage through your chosen path A depiction of wisdom through your experiences An illustration of happiness through your humour An image of resilience through your adversity A report of wealth through your acumen A tale of nobility through your actions A myth of grandeur through your life of contribution
Let us all be remembered For the lives we touched For the people helped For the wisdom we shared For the stories we told For the laughter we initiated For the love we gave For the affection we showed For the good role models we were For the communities we inspired For the youth we guided For the hungry we feed For the needy we assisted For the success we created For the risk we took For the world we changed Let us write down our stories Let us tell our experiences Let us record our tales Let us share our struggles For our children For our grandchildren For generations to see For generations to hear As a source of hope As a source of wisdom As a source of guidance As an example of our legacy So what will you leave?
Haki Aitoro
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Comments about this poem (Success Poems - What will be your legacy?
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Baidehi Ghosh (5/26/2010 12:48:00 AM)
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THE POEM IS REALLY VERY POTRAYING ESPECIALLY THE LAST TWO STANZAS..THEY MEANT A LOT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Ken E Hall (11/19/2009 5:27:00 AM)
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Haki forget all the poem except from last section 'Let us all be remembered'
which is excellent to the last line 'So what will you leave' hell of a lot of meaning
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regards
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