hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,038 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Such Is Life - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Daily you die
With desperate try
Hoping to find clear sky
With wings to fly

Such is life with us
And we fully trust
It has never ending mission
And it is self confession

So seek no frustration
Never be down with any question
Life is so beautiful to enjoy
Even thought threatened with decoy

So what even if world goes mad?
Why should we become sad?
We are here with special permission
Guilty mind may be pardoned with simple admission

No doors are closed
No question is posed
Try to live and adjust
Love and trust is must

Sleep well and leave behind
The world so beautiful but unkind
Wait for another day with sunshine
Everything will be alright and look fine

Try not for impossible
That may sometimes land you in trouble
The mental peace will be disturbed
The wounds may unnecessarily be rubbed


Comments about Such Is Life by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    welcome Ramesh Rai, d Fai Sha like this.
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:23:00 PM)

    Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon and Fai Sha like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    inspirational


    Bubble12 minutes ago
    wonderful
    Comment +1
    great (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Kevin Walker14 minutes ago
    as always
    Comment 1 Comment+1
    Heart WARMING (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Arlethia Joseph9 minutes ago
    This poem talks about the way we view life and the aspect that we must face on day to day basic. It's tells us of things that God allows to happen with many different doors opening and that we should not be afraid of change. Very moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    Arlethia Joseph9 minutes ago
    This poem talks about the way we view life and the aspect that we must face on day to day basic. It's tells us of things that God allows to happen with many different doors opening and that we should not be afraid of change. Very moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    Inspiring


    Angel Saavedra13 minutes ago
    Has a nice tone to it of why we shouldn't submit to that normal.
    Comment +1
    being possitive (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    Bridget Kathleen Staggs10 minutes ago
    A little lengthy
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  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    Hmm...


    Krista Thompson13 minutes ago
    Work on English verb usage. Good, expansive vocabulary. Good ideas. Although you have a good vocabulary, be definitive and decisive in your word choice. Lots of potential. Time to mold this one into something even more spectacular! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 67,038 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 9:53:00 PM)

    Daily you die
    With desperate try (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013


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