hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,433 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Such is life


Daily you die
With desperate try
Hoping to find clear sky
With wings to fly

Such is life with us
And we fully trust
It has never ending mission
And it is self confession

So seek no frustration
Never be down with any question
Life is so beautiful to enjoy
Even thought threatened with decoy

So what even if world goes mad?
Why should we become sad?
We are here with special permission
Guilty mind may be pardoned with simple admission

No doors are closed
No question is posed
Try to live and adjust
Love and trust is must

Sleep well and leave behind
The world so beautiful but unkind
Wait for another day with sunshine
Everything will be alright and look fine

Try not for impossible
That may sometimes land you in trouble
The mental peace will be disturbed
The wounds may unnecessarily be rubbed

Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 25, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 18,433 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Arlethia Joseph9 minutes ago
    This poem talks about the way we view life and the aspect that we must face on day to day basic. It's tells us of things that God allows to happen with many different doors opening and that we should not be afraid of change. Very moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,433 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:05:00 PM)

    Arlethia Joseph9 minutes ago
    This poem talks about the way we view life and the aspect that we must face on day to day basic. It's tells us of things that God allows to happen with many different doors opening and that we should not be afraid of change. Very moving. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,433 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    Inspiring


    Angel Saavedra13 minutes ago
    Has a nice tone to it of why we shouldn't submit to that normal.
    Comment +1
    being possitive (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,433 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/24/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    Hmm...


    Krista Thompson13 minutes ago
    Work on English verb usage. Good, expansive vocabulary. Good ideas. Although you have a good vocabulary, be definitive and decisive in your word choice. Lots of potential. Time to mold this one into something even more spectacular! (Report) Reply

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