Such Soul Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Such Soul

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“I do not want to die” she held my hand firmly
I could see pain in her eyes strongly
She was frightened with fear of departure
Death for her was not very far

I could hardly stop the tears
Her words were knocking in ears
“When will you come”? She may ask often
I will smilingly look back and shake hand even

Such were the happy days
Children were making it hay days
We wee a happy family and union
She was my best and reliable companion

She stood like firm rock
Always happy and cutting jokes
She will never offend but submit
To whatever proposal I felt fit

Such soul was in pain today
She had hidden desire on the way
She wanted more time with family
But alas! It was not agreed to by almighty

Her words pierced through
I was out of sense and felt enough
She will be on the way to freedom
I shall be crying here for her seat in heaven

I feel no other go
It will be terrific blow
To me in person and to family in particular
The lose may be felt by all similarly

Saturday, April 12, 2014
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Gajanan Mishra 12 April 2014

on the way to freedom, good writing sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

nice read Sai Krishna29 minutes ago wonderful poem thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Such soul is truthful. Flora Liu15 minutes ago The details are enough and the words are touching. Comment +2

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2022

She stood like a rock.. encouraging words

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Very poifgnant and soulful, this poem of companionship and togetherness! With you, Mehtaji! Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Apr 13,2014 5 minute

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Very poifgnant and soulful, this poem of companionship and togetherness! With you, Mehtaji! Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India Apr 13,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

Like 7 hours ago by From my Soul to Such soul

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 April 2014

loss is universal Guilty Pleasure1 hour ago and faith supreme..bless you and yours, poet

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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