Im having those feelings more than ever,
My minds has those thoughts
That is so clever,
It’s like my feelings are a lever,
So as suicide thoughts race through my head,
Im lying in a puddle of blood in my coffin bed,
Suicide thoughts are in my vains,
Everyday im going more and more insane,
Still having to play that suicide game,
Im so ashamed,
That I don’t want to tell,
But why not say f*ck it,
Im already going to hell,
I mean im f**king retarded,
I can’t even spell,
Now that im holding it all in,
Nobody will have a clue,
Ill hang myself farther than,
When my face turns blue
WHY NOIT KILL MYSELF IM GONNA DIOE SOMEDAY TELL ME THAT
i know how u feel i have suicidal since i was n 7th grade (4 my own reasons) i thinnk bout it every day. But somtimes im glad my attempts were just attempts
Im lying in a puddle of blood in my coffin bed, Suicide thoughts are in my vains, Everyday im going more and more insane, Still having to play that suicide game, great images for your reader... this is truly a great peice of poetry. it expresses what I once felt before... your the first one that I am telling this to but I have tried to commit suicide twice... for my own reasons. I am so glad they both failed... I wouldnt be here and doing the things I love to do. you are a talented writer, so you are needed to keep spreeding the Miracle of poetry on to others. Becca
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hello there...my name is leanna and i so know how u feel i had tryed killin my self so many times...im depressed to but trust me suicide is not THE WAY...what ever you do dont killyourself but i do like your pomes but maby u can do these pomes without really meaning it someday..nice pome..