Treasure Island

XxEmotional PoetxX

(June 4,1995 / Indiana)

Suicide


A person can only take so much,
In my hand, A knife I clutch,
I want to take my life away,
And tell how worthless I am, To say,
I have a frown upon my face,
I want to run away from this place,
And end my life, I want to die,
My head upon my hands, I cry,
To comfort me, It will not work,
Away from the world, I want to jerk,
The one's who love me, Try to make it better,
Forever unknowing, Of that one short letter,
The letter I wrote before I died,
The letter I wrote, of Suicide.

Submitted: Monday, April 28, 2008
Edited: Friday, May 02, 2008

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Suicide by XxEmotional PoetxX )

Enter the verification code :

  • Mindy Brown (5/4/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    i like ur poem it is simple and right to the point and it rhymes! i can never really get my poems to do that i cant find the right words! lol... i am new to this site and i will be writing stuff like this.. u r welcome to come check out my poems in about 2-3 days when i have more on here :) (Report) Reply

  • Jenevieve Larcombe (5/2/2008 3:50:00 PM)

    whoever gave you a rating of one sucks! ! !
    lol
    i like it because people often look down on others who commit or think about commiting suicide...
    i think you would like the poem i wrote called 'No more crying' because it has the same idea!
    us young writters need to stand strong and stick together! ! ! !
    good job!
    Jenn (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. Jadavpur University Campus And The Lefti.., Bijay Kant Dubey
  2. Excellence, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  3. Chains, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan
  4. New Dawn, Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
  5. The Stolen Ancient Landmark, Sir Toby
  6. The Book O' Life, Sir Toby
  7. Performing To Do Well, Lawrence S. Pertillar
  8. Wear a Cons Smile, Kevin Patrick
  9. Being aware, hasmukh amathalal
  10. Needed, Michael McParland

Poem of the Day

poet Geoffrey Chaucer

The firste stock-father of gentleness,
What man desireth gentle for to be,
Must follow his trace, and all his wittes dress,
Virtue to love, and vices for to flee;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  7. If, Rudyard Kipling
  8. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  9. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  10. Alone, Edgar Allan Poe

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]