Treasure Island

Lizzie Resendiz

(4-4-94 / Samson, AL)

Suicide


Suicide
It's all i think about
Suicide
Can't get it out
Suicide
So hard to resist
Suicide
resist the urge to slit my wrist
Suicide
wishing i had a gun
Suicide
all i have is a small razor
Suicide
so i drag the blade across my legs and arms
Suicide
wishing to do myself much more harm
Suicide
and i wake soaked in blood
Suicide
cuts all over my body
Suicide
and im still somehow alive
Suicide
deep and long so much blood lost
Suicide
how am i still here?
Suicide
I really need a gun
Suicide
one day... one day
Suicide

Submitted: Sunday, May 24, 2009

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  • Maria Badillo (12/28/2011 1:14:00 PM)

    i agree wit yhu..i think suicide sometimes but i have someone to tlk to but i dnt tlk to them...but yhur poem is perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • Zack Krzeminski (7/31/2010 12:21:00 AM)

    awesome poem i give it a 10
    the way its written is really good
    hope you check out my witings on here (Report) Reply

  • Dannnielle Bratt (10/25/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    I can truely relate I have tryed to end it by cutting but it failed it's like you wrote that poem about me freE writing keep it up can't wait to read more (Report) Reply

  • Lii Taito (6/27/2009 3:05:00 PM)

    Wow...that's so harsh. I hope ur still alive to write more poems LOL! That was beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Music 1395 (6/16/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    i get the message,
    alot of people can relate to that poem,
    love the way its written,
    god job,

    but suicide is not the way,
    no offence (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    one day... one day
    Suicide......it is all defeatist views butmany withdraw afrom race forthefear of rage or reprisals..... good write....10 (Report) Reply

  • Emma-lee Rogan (5/28/2009 5:31:00 AM)

    you know something suicide is never the answer to anything it actually makes you feel a whole lot worse (Report) Reply

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